I have been whining for 2 post in a row? Here, adding another one.
u decide.
Black, mailed. Red, my lecturer reply. Blue, my comments.
Audience: Teenagers and above (so up to 99??? Such a wide audience? It means your STYLE must cater to ALL!)
Actually, I even planned to put General Public, generally all ages. But i didn’t as I am not going to do any kiddo part. If that fella is 99 years old, and is still strong enough to listen, why not?
Topic: Impacts (the word does not take an 's') of climate change
Scope: The audience will…
1) understand more on ( this phrase is always vague ) how it can affect one’s health (still not clear on what will be covered here)
‘health’. Not clear enough? Good health=long life. Bad health=die faster (God is still the only All-Knowing). Im covering a few main points!
Heat wave+lesser ozone= skin diseases
Mosquitoes loves the warm temperature!= Disease up! Die die die!
Drought and floods= urgh!
2) be more aware (again vague) of how vulnerable it is towards farming and food production (still not clear on what will be covered here)
Did you just find out the copy and paste function fun and is addicted to it?
What is it that is not clear? Don’t understand farming? Or food production?
3) also be more alert of how fragile our wildlife and forests are (same problem here)
Similar answer here too. Wildlife? Forests?
4) know what they can do to make a change! (so you will cover some ways?)
Like duh. What else can it be? Sit still? and continue sucking in oxygen and giving Co2 out? Hoping that someone somewhere out there will make a change?
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